Arbieroo reviewed This immortal by Roger Zelazny (SF alternatives)
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This is Zelazny's first novel - and, unfortunately, it shows. There's enough plot for a taut novella but this is bulked up to twice that size by lengthy, dull conversations and superfluous or overly emphasized fight scenes. The characters are not particularly interesting and the plot, such as there is of it, is basically incomprehensible until explained by a pile of exposition at the end. I can't really recommend this even to Zelazny fans.