There's an interesting story in here behind the writing.
3 stars
This is a book that was recommended to me by a friend. I can understand why they suggested it to me, it's in line with a few things that I'd probably enjoy. Unfortunately I couldn't really enjoy this one. It's been a while but I'm new here so if I get a few things wrong it's not intentional.
Anyway.
I like the premise of this book. I like the world that was created. I like a lot of the characters. There's a "Dark Tower" ness to it in the sense that the world has "moved on". Know what I mean? The world feels rough. Ugly. Ruined in some way. Not in a Mad Max kind of way but in a "we sucked all the life out of it" kind of way. In my mind everything, even the water, is gray. Ya follow?
There's pirates, a floating city, a government run …
This is a book that was recommended to me by a friend. I can understand why they suggested it to me, it's in line with a few things that I'd probably enjoy. Unfortunately I couldn't really enjoy this one. It's been a while but I'm new here so if I get a few things wrong it's not intentional.
Anyway.
I like the premise of this book. I like the world that was created. I like a lot of the characters. There's a "Dark Tower" ness to it in the sense that the world has "moved on". Know what I mean? The world feels rough. Ugly. Ruined in some way. Not in a Mad Max kind of way but in a "we sucked all the life out of it" kind of way. In my mind everything, even the water, is gray. Ya follow?
There's pirates, a floating city, a government run agency looking for people, scientists, religion, different races, steam punk cyborgs, a very odd sword that could have come from a Frank Herbert book, a race of people with sphincters for mouths, vampires... Sounds pretty good right? And it really is.
However...
The writing is good but I feel like it's overly showy. I understand that China is a linguist and it felt to me like that was the whole reason for the books existence. To flex the linguist muscle. Imagine a book written by a race car driver. When it comes to talking about the racing it's gonna be great. Everything else... well... not so much. That's how I felt about this book.
I'm not going to spoil anything specific here but for the most part the book trudges along just fine but when there's a change it's very jarring. Some 75% through the book we suddenly shift perspectives completely with no explanation or reason given. It lasts about a page. It doesn't do it ever before that, or again after.
For me the writing felt like it was trying to gatekeep the story from me by giving so little of it so often. There's a few moments in the book where we get a decent plot dump and some character development and then there's a lot of drudgery in between.
I liked it. Not enough to read anything else. I didn't hate it, but it was bad enough for me to not really want to search out more.
