Romeo and Julia turned fantasy Vikings. I got a thing for Vikings abd strong bloodthirsty women. I loved the beginning of the story, and the writing was superb. But there are some things that could have been better.
There were no boats! Why were there no boats, suddenly this became more Celtic/Germanic. Boats seem to be pretty important, if you write about vikings. Also some things were really confusing, how often did they have fighting season? Every 5 years? Why did it sound like you have them every year??? And well, why exactly did the brother choose to go and kill his own tribe? Little bit drastic, huh? It would have been nice, if things like these would have been addressed. But I read it, I loved the beginning and the rest was nice. So, definitely worthwhile.