I enjoyed the idea behind this story a great deal, although unfortunately it suffered from that most common of plagues: the indi typo pool.
In this case, the errors included:
•"'We’re going to have to blow them up,' the grey-haired yelled back, equally frustrated." The grey-haired what?
•“I think the cargo containers would protest the servers against even an EMP blast.” Not "protect", then?
•"before they were disable", "descend several levels toward keel", "Carrying a HK417 ", "A few minutes he emerged ". All of these are missing something (a "d", a "the", an "n", and an "in" or a "later").

Once again, you can argue that these are little things. But I just don't understand how, if there's more than one person on these works, these things get through. How can people read the words on the page and miss these when in each and every instance the sentences they form are broken?

Still, a very clever techno idea and one which I enjoyed reading about. Recommended to fans of Suarez.